Well Jack, I really enjoyed this (even if it is more than the 100 words allowed. That mirror must be magical for all the other animals to appear. Be careful about your sentences, sometimes you have put full stops in the wrong place, perhaps a re-read will help you sort this? I think this is a great story...and would love to know what happens next!
Well Jack, I really enjoyed this (even if it is more than the 100 words allowed. That mirror must be magical for all the other animals to appear. Be careful about your sentences, sometimes you have put full stops in the wrong place, perhaps a re-read will help you sort this? I think this is a great story...and would love to know what happens next!
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