Tuesday, 30 April 2013

Alex's 100wc - week 28:

The noise of the crowd was deafening. Huge bombs whistling on their way down, absorbing London's great city people. It was the most shocking picture ever. After ten minutes I was just a spectater from the above. I wished I could of helped, watching the place you were raised in be destroyed by a army of super villain criminals is unbearable.

By Alex.

2 comments:

  1. Wow - powerful stuff, Alex! This feels like the beginning of a great story - I want to read more! You've used plenty of excellent language - well done.
    Mr K :-)

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  2. Hi Alex, I really liked your start to the 100wc...I was hooked! I wonder why the bombs were being dropped?

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