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This was a well written entry and you have lovely hand writing. Well done!I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.
i liked your story because you put lots of detail.you need to work on your spelling.also you need more full stops.
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This was a well written entry and you have lovely hand writing. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.
i liked your story because you put lots of detail.you need to work on your spelling.also you need more full stops.
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