Hi Oscar, Thank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I really enjoyed reading your work. You have used some good vocabulary in your writing and you have also used a range of punctuation. The dialogue that you have used adds to the excitement of your writing. Well done! Mrs Stones http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
Hi Oscar,
ReplyDeleteThank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I really enjoyed reading your work. You have used some good vocabulary in your writing and you have also used a range of punctuation. The dialogue that you have used adds to the excitement of your writing.
Well done!
Mrs Stones
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/