Wednesday 5 December 2012

All hail our Queen of Sentences!

All Hail our new Queen of Sentences!
Well done for this stunning sentence:
The bent, tall, hollow tree made a minor arch across the bitter, yet refreshing water in the narrow lake.
Long live the Queen!

6 comments:

  1. Wow,this piece of writing is epic i love the powerful language like:refreshing water and narrow lake there great sentences. Congratulation on being Queen of sentences.

    All hail the Queen

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  2. Hi your majesty,
    that is an amazing sentence, I didn't know you could write that well. That would be a good sentence to use in a Christmas story.
    I hope I can read more of your amazing sentences.
    Keep up the good work.
    From Holly

    I really liked it too it was really creative and captivating I only wish I could have heard all the rest of your sentences! Oh and congratulations! I hope it's me next week.
    From Beth

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  3. WOW! I loved your sentences, how did you come up with the idea.
    LONG LIVE THE QUEEN!

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  4. Well done your work lookes good you put lots of effort in your work you are the queen for the day.

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  5. Nice work, This is a wonderful!
    It makes me clap everytime
    I read this post.

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  6. I am so happy for you. I thought you would get it the minute I heard your sentence well done your majesty from gaby in ash class greenfields!!!!!!!!!

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