Hi Ceri - well done for this super 100wc! I think the best part about it is that you've used so much fantastic language (but don't use the 2A sentences too much - get some of the others in there!). The worst thing is that now I feel VERY hungry! Mr K :-)
Yum...Sounds delicious, Ceri! I wonder if you returned to the leftovers later? You've written well for the challenge and managed to get the readers' mouths watering, writing well for your audience. Maybe read through your work and try to spot some small spelling mistakes. Great effort. Well done.
Hi Ceri - well done for this super 100wc! I think the best part about it is that you've used so much fantastic language (but don't use the 2A sentences too much - get some of the others in there!). The worst thing is that now I feel VERY hungry!
ReplyDeleteMr K :-)
Thanks mr k I will try to get on the blog more and I will write like this every day• Also thanks for putting it on the blog•
ReplyDeleteHi Ceri,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a great, natural take on the 100 word challenge prompt. My mouth is watering too! Good work.
Yum...Sounds delicious, Ceri! I wonder if you returned to the leftovers later? You've written well for the challenge and managed to get the readers' mouths watering, writing well for your audience. Maybe read through your work and try to spot some small spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteGreat effort. Well done.