Hi Holly - this is a super 100wc that has made me really want to find out what happens next - what was in the chest? You've used some lovely different sentence types, which make your writing interesting to read - well done! Mr K :-)
Dear Holly, this is another great composition from you. I enjoy your story. You ended well with the suspense that keep your readers asking, "what happened next?" Kudos!
Hi Holly - this is a super 100wc that has made me really want to find out what happens next - what was in the chest? You've used some lovely different sentence types, which make your writing interesting to read - well done!
ReplyDeleteMr K :-)
Dear Holly, this is another great composition from you. I enjoy your story.
ReplyDeleteYou ended well with the suspense that keep your readers asking, "what happened next?"
Kudos!