Suddenly the pain in my arm... it's bleeding and I am in agony as I'm running away from the beastly shark. "Help me" I screamed loudly! People are shouting get him out! The life guard (who had an orange jacket) is coming to save me. I stop because I'm out of the sea. I fall faintly onto the soft gold sand.
I'm rushing to the hospital I'm saying to the doctor "am I going to be alright?" I gasped.
"Well we don't know yet - we're going to the x-ray room." I fall asleep as they are x-raying me...
By Becky.
Hello Becky,
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I like your story because I get the sense of panic that must be going on if you are trying to escape a shark. Would you really be running if you were trying to escape a shark in the sea though?
Well done again
Keep entering the 100wc
Mrs W - Team 100wc
Flamborough, East Yorkshire, England
My class blog on http://kittiwakesclass2012.primaryblogger.co.uk if you would like to have a look where we are.
Yes I would love to see your blog. And thank you for the comment you send me.
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