The livid beast tore off mt arm but I ran despite the pain. I jumped into a hole. As I lay suddenly the pain in my arm got worse. I ripped my clothes to make a bandage. The beast put his head through the hole. The vile-looking face scared me: I was stuck alone. Trapped.
Maybe I should tell you what happened from the start. I was on a walk in the forest with my friend. Suddenly a beast jumped out and it got my friend. He was courageous: he risked his life for my life and I will never forget that.
By Hannah
Well done Hannah really interesting love your sentences.
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