Thursday, 9 May 2013

Jack W's 100wc - week 29:

Suddenly the pain in my arm became worse and worse. The gritty battlefields was coverd with enemy forces, and I had been shot in the arm. The more I move, the more blood spills out of my unpleasant arm.

I try to move to one side but they keep shooting at me. The only thing I can do now is pray. I could suddenly hear a noise. It's the British army: theyve come to save me. Bang: the tank blew the enemy to smithereens.

I feel strong arms pull me onto a helicopter: I'm saved...

By Jack W.

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