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What an exciting story Alex. I loved the phrase "step by slow step" for building up tension. I wonder what happens next?
Nice story Alex like the bit "step by slow step" at first i thought it didn't make sense,but nice story :-)
Well done Alex.It reminds me of Slender,I liked your handwriting it was very neat. Keep it up
Thanks Jack, glad you liked it.
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What an exciting story Alex. I loved the phrase "step by slow step" for building up tension. I wonder what happens next?
ReplyDeleteNice story Alex like the bit "step by slow step" at first i thought it didn't make sense,but nice story :-)
ReplyDeleteWell done Alex.It reminds me of Slender,I liked your handwriting it was very neat. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThanks Jack, glad you liked it.
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