Sunday, 16 September 2012

Samantha's 100wc - week 1:

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6 comments:

  1. To Samantha

    I really liked all your adjectives.

    From Katherine
    Vardon School
    NZ

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  2. i liked the writing it made sense, but what kind of monster was it?

    marina

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  3. Well done Samantha this is a wicked piece of writing

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  4. Hi Samantha,

    I enjoyed your story a great deal. I really liked the way you described the beast, and how you made me know how it made you feel. You should try and check your spelling and punctuation a little more to make it even better.

    Tim Bareham - Team 100WC

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  5. Cool well done Samantha that is GREAT writing!

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