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To SamanthaI really liked all your adjectives.From KatherineVardon SchoolNZ
i liked the writing it made sense, but what kind of monster was it?marina
i can't tell
Well done Samantha this is a wicked piece of writing
Hi Samantha,I enjoyed your story a great deal. I really liked the way you described the beast, and how you made me know how it made you feel. You should try and check your spelling and punctuation a little more to make it even better.Tim Bareham - Team 100WC
Cool well done Samantha that is GREAT writing!
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To Samantha
ReplyDeleteI really liked all your adjectives.
From Katherine
Vardon School
NZ
i liked the writing it made sense, but what kind of monster was it?
ReplyDeletemarina
i can't tell
DeleteWell done Samantha this is a wicked piece of writing
ReplyDeleteHi Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story a great deal. I really liked the way you described the beast, and how you made me know how it made you feel. You should try and check your spelling and punctuation a little more to make it even better.
Tim Bareham - Team 100WC
Cool well done Samantha that is GREAT writing!
ReplyDelete