Holly I love the suspense you built in your story - it had me on the edge of my seat! Great ending, with all the pleasant things appearing as your dream ends - great work!
Holly that was a grat peas of righting I loved it I wish I could hear the rest of it but it is only a 100 w c. I can't wait to hear your next one Holly.
Holly this is a very scary piece! Sounds like a nightmare :s I like how you included your brother in this. Well done.
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Holly I love the suspense you built in your story - it had me on the edge of my seat! Great ending, with all the pleasant things appearing as your dream ends - great work!
ReplyDeleteHolly that was a grat peas of righting I loved it I wish I could hear the rest of it but it is only a 100 w c. I can't wait to hear your next one Holly.
ReplyDeleteI agree! (I'm never going to leave your blog Mr k!)
DeleteWow Holly that's really good and the bit about you're brother I know how you feel!
ReplyDeleteHi thanks Beth I can't help insulting my brother I do it to his face as well as in story's. I call him a weird muppet!!!!!
DeleteCreepy I have never herd of a story that calls the monster a unknown creature!
ReplyDeleteHi thanks for my comments bye
ReplyDeleteHi thanks for my comments bye
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