Thursday 27 September 2012

Outstanding descriptive writing!

Here's some fantastic descriptive writing by Beth - she was describing the box out of the Ancient Greek myth, Pandora's Box. Which is your favourite part of her writing? let us know by leaving a comment!
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9 comments:

  1. JC28 September 2012 at 06:13

    Well done Beth.I love your 3D box it's ace .I like the new words like intricate, shimmering. Well done

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  2. Sam b28 September 2012 at 06:25

    Beth the only thing to say at that is wow.

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  3. Anonymous1 October 2012 at 02:13

    hi beth i realy liked your writing because you have used good adjectives well done

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  4. Anonymous1 October 2012 at 02:15

    cool i really enjoyed looking at your 3D box.

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  5. mrs styles1 October 2012 at 02:21

    That was AMAZING!The words intricate is a
    REALLY good word!Well Done beth!

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  6. A sleigh m3 October 2012 at 03:35

    Wow Beth well done!

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  7. Becky5 October 2012 at 05:27

    Well done Beth your pitcher is good u should be a artist. :) ;)

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  8. Jack w10 October 2012 at 06:49

    Well done keep Beth keep it up :-)

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  9. Pav10 October 2012 at 06:57

    Hi Beth I like all of it but I mostly liked the part when you said it has a twig design engraved on it.

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