Sunday 16 September 2012

Samantha's 100wc - week 1:

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6 comments:

  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!16 September 2012 at 19:05

    To Samantha

    I really liked all your adjectives.

    From Katherine
    Vardon School
    NZ

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  2. marina17 September 2012 at 12:35

    i liked the writing it made sense, but what kind of monster was it?

    marina

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  3. Holly19 September 2012 at 05:32

    Well done Samantha this is a wicked piece of writing

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  4. Tim Bareham19 September 2012 at 11:40

    Hi Samantha,

    I enjoyed your story a great deal. I really liked the way you described the beast, and how you made me know how it made you feel. You should try and check your spelling and punctuation a little more to make it even better.

    Tim Bareham - Team 100WC

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  5. Ashleigh m3 October 2012 at 03:37

    Cool well done Samantha that is GREAT writing!

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