Tuesday 30 April 2013

Sammy A's 100wc - week 28:

Immediately, there was a suden bang it came from nowere the noise was deafening and earpopping. We all dashed into mum's bedroom and hid under the bed hoping we would all be ok. Unexpectedly it suddenly stoped the house was still and tranquil. I slowly opened the door (well the remains of the door more like). In the blink of an eye the house was all gone, arrr I screeched. Help help.
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  1. Anonymous1 May 2013 at 07:32

    I like the ideas hat you have put in your writing. It makes me want to find out what happens next.

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  2. Mr Kenyon1 May 2013 at 13:02

    Sammy - what a great 100wc! You've used some fantastic language, especially those adverbs! Do have a quick to check to see if you can spot where any bits of punctuation might be missing though.
    Great stuff! Mr K :-)

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