I do the most exercise because I keep getting chased bye birds. It's really annoying! Once they nearly wripped me to shreads, I hate little baby chicks. I woke up this morning thinking that they will not get me. So I walked outside to have some fresh air. I brought a book out with me; no wonder they call me a book-worm! Guess what happened, you guessed it, the birds gobbled me up bit by bit.
By Gaby.
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Hi Gaby - I agree with Tyler: this is a super 100wc! I'd only perhaps change the end - instead of your character being gobbled up, you could have explored the idea of being a 'bookworm' a bit more. But still a great 100wc - well done!
ReplyDeleteAnd Tyler, what a fab improved sentence - good checking!
Mr K :-)