Wednesday, 5 June 2013

Jade's 100wc - week 33:

Hello I'm Cormac and I'm a worm, my kind have to be carefull because the birds viciously watch our every move closely from the treetops. It is like being stared at endlessly, it gives you an intense feeling that goes on day and night. Every second of every day you know your being watched and look around you as you shiver with fear. There big yellow eyes move to the shape of your body, there's no stopping it. Suddenly the birds swoop down, as quick as a flash. Is this the end?
By Jade.
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2 comments:

  1. A great story Jade! You really described the worm's fear very well.I loved some of your words too - the birds viciously watching, and the intense feeling! Well done!

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  2. Hannah team 100WC10 June 2013 at 11:29

    Hello Jade, thank you for writing for the 100WC, I really loved reading your story and how you wrote it from the perspective of the worm! Well done great writing!

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