Hi Charlie, and well done for your 100wc this week. You've used so much great, descriptive language, but make sure that you don't overuse the 2A sentence type - go for a variety of the sentences we've learned! Also, make sure you check those full stops - have you got them all in the right place? A super 100wc! Keep it up, Charlie! Mr K :-)
Hi Charlie. Super 100WC! Loved the ending to your writing. I really liked your descriptive writing - made your story much more exciting. Just be careful with a few spellings. Lovely handwriting too. Keep it up! Never stop writing :) 100WC Team
Hi Charlie, and well done for your 100wc this week. You've used so much great, descriptive language, but make sure that you don't overuse the 2A sentence type - go for a variety of the sentences we've learned! Also, make sure you check those full stops - have you got them all in the right place?
ReplyDeleteA super 100wc! Keep it up, Charlie!
Mr K :-)
Hi Charlie. Super 100WC! Loved the ending to your writing. I really liked your descriptive writing - made your story much more exciting. Just be careful with a few spellings. Lovely handwriting too. Keep it up! Never stop writing :) 100WC Team
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